breakdown123
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Join date: Jul 2008
892 IQ
#1
so this is a little simple acoustic riff i wrote today after learning some basic fingerpicking stuff. its more about the melody then the technique. i have some basic lyrics written down.

i detect a difference in your laugh,
and i wonder is this going to become the past,
something different about your smile
something different about your laugh.

so critique?
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liam1107
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Join date: Mar 2007
464 IQ
#2
its a lovely melody and thats the end of that, just one of those melodies that gets you
well done
breakdown123
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Join date: Jul 2008
892 IQ
#4
yeah, it was kidna just thrown into guitar pro really quickly after doing a basic recording.

the original demo had a solo on it lol, it kinda seemed out of place though.