Zeltaok
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2008
104 IQ
#1
Well, this is my first attempt at writing a metalcore song and I'm kinda satisfied with the outcome. The reason to why I wrote this song is mainly because I recently started listening to God Forbid and I became inspired to write something like this.

There are some parts that I think might need some reshaping and the small solo kinda feels a little out of place.
I do have a breakdown in this song, as many other metalcore song, but it is very brief because I'm not a fan of too long breakdowns.
I would be very happy if you people could crit my song because this is the stuff I like to play and write, so some tips on how to improve this would be greatly appreciated.

And, of course, Crit 4 Crit
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Scepter of Life.zip