Okay this is my first lyric post, but not my first time wrting a song. I'm just having a little trouble with this one. I know it's not that great, but be totally honest. This would just be the first verse.

Making my way blindly
Not forcing anything
Something like this
Is worth the wait
Looking to the sky
All I see is darkness
I can wait as long as it takes
To finally see the light one day

Suggestions and constructive criticism please.
You and I are mortal, but rock n roll will never die.
Last edited by jcboomer at Feb 28, 2009,