I like it. It has real potential with some good lyrics. I would vary the strum pattern a little bit though, it gets a little boring.
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id say no need to call it a pop song, but depends on the style you aproach further way. for now, the progression is really nice, also the voice overdubbing and all of it, good be rally good piece after all.
C4C you say... in the sig
i like this piece. the chord progression is pretty catchy. the lead is good, and i like the vocals. i think it would be better if you had lyrics though too, but the ooh's and aah's do work. keep working on this, there's a lot of potential. i wish i could give you a more detailed crit, but it's a pretty short piece and i don't see anything wrong with it really. i'd listen to a completed version.