I've been picking at Van Halen's Eruption (no pun intended) and I want to improve on this so I can perfect it for a show or something.


Are there areas of improvement I could work on?
On a scale of 1-10 what would you rate it?
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It's like a 7 to me. Almost all the notes are correct, but the timing is a little funky and almost unsure. Some parts could be cleaned up a little. But you have it down very well. good job man.
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sounds pretty good to me. 8.5

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I can't put my finger on it, but some parts just don't seem right >_> (No not the parts that need whammy)

I think it's that you need to make it faster? o_o
and some of the timing is weird...

but otherwise good job! 8/10, it's hard to remember all those damned notes in that song...
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