#1
UNITY ANTHEM


Verse part 1:

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Solidarity!) becoming just a dream
(Equality!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun

Verse part 2:

There's a battle going down between east and west
Over whose religion is the best
Common deciency thrown right out the window
Is this how mankind is gonna go?

Chorus:

Can't you see where we're headed
As you watch our demise
You can't hide from the truth
You can't just close your eyes

Verse part 1

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Solidarity!) becoming just a dream
(Equality!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun

Verse part 2:

There's a battle going down between right and wrong
But good and bad have become the same song
Find it in your heart and define wrong from right
Take away the gray keep it black and white

Chorus:

Can't you see where we're headed
As you watch our demise
You can't hide from the truth
You can't just close your eyes

Verse Part 1

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Unity!) becoming just a dream
(Unity!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun
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Last edited by Descendent-182 at Mar 7, 2009,
#2
On the first read-through, I liked this,
I'll come back to it in a minute,

but I just wanted to let you know it's spelled "decency"
#3
UNITY ANTHEM


Verse part 1:

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Unity!) becoming just a dream
(Unity!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun


Verse part 2:

There's a war going down between east and west
[seems a bit too close to 'there's a war going down between my brothers tonight for me.' there's no way people you are playing for are not going to know op ivy, or at least unity. you might want to rethink this line to not catch hell.]
Over whose religion is the best
Common decency thrown right out the window
Is this how mankind is gonna go?



Chorus:

Can't you see where we're headed
As you watch our demise
You can't hide from the truth
You can't just close your eyes
[is this after the chorus? like, a bridge? i do like it, whatever it is.]

Verse part 1

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Unity!) becoming just a dream
(Unity!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun

Verse part 2:

There's a war going down between right and wrong
[same comment as above, but i do like the repetition.]
But good and bad have become the same song
Find it in your heart and define wrong from right
Take away the gray keep it black and white


Chorus:

Can't you see where we're headed
As you watch our demise
You can't hide from the truth
You can't just close your eyes

Verse Part 1

(Unity!) Dangles on a string
(Unity!) becoming just a dream
(Unity!) Will it ever come
Growing farther with each setting sun

it's hard to write a unity song because there are SO many of them, but i definitely think this has some major solid points in it. keep writing and, more importantly, keep questing ALL.