not that bad. not that good.
thats just the music. that video.
Dear God.

Ok, breakdown.
Vocals. Slightly decent imo. You sounds like you hold back though.
You tend to keep it calm even when the drums are ragin in the backround.

Guitar. It was alright. i mean, it wasn't Megadeth riffs but it fit well.
I enjoy the effects they were well placed.

Bass. ahh who needs bass.

Drums. Good Drummer, terrible sound man.

overall ya'll need to spruce up. but really good start.
and hey your good enough to make me stop listening to NIN for a second.
Keep it up.