#1
Hey guys

came up with some of a song for my band...

we've got the start recorded wondered if you guys fancied giving some feedback - its a song written with a call and answer approach for male and female vocals

Male vocals
Female Vocals

Things could be different between you and me
I need some time to think
I can change for the better you'll see
Give me some room to breathe

I love you more than you will know
You know i love you still
I can never let you go
I know you love me still

Still a working progress - feedback would be good gonna get it written fully soon
#2
no offense but this song sounds very generic, i can't see anything in it thats already been done, you should change the lyrics up a bit through some metaphors or play on words, because this sounds like anybody could write it so find an edge thats different.