i was shooting for something like obituary but a bit more melodic...

the title is a bit corny/goofy i admit but im kinda fond of it. as a whole i dont think i did too bad on this one. however i think the solo could be better, and maybe it should be moved more toward the end of the song. anyone have any opinions/suggestions/criticism?
A Dead Mans Sonata.zip
this is my song. i made it out of music. please help it grow big and strong by criticising it mercilessly