#1
It's clear to me you want to stay friends
But mary blue, I'll love you till' the end
Sharing breaths under an open fire
You are the pit of my burning heart
Six days has passed, i haven't heard you speak
I could feel your hand, i still haven't heard you speak

(chorus)
Mary blue, what did i do?
Did the truth get between us?
It's hurting inside, it's hard to chew
Did the truth get underneath us?
Speak to me, Mary blue
Sleep next to me, Mary blue

Our shadows won't ever cross each other paths
Your arrogance is turning me to a psychopath
Burying dreams under your close eyes
You are the snake in my poisoned soul
The months turned in, I haven't seen you the same
The torture begins, I still haven't seen you the same

(Chorus)

I'm laying in bed, waiting for you to kiss me good night
I'm laying under the sheet, waiting for you to turn on the light
I'm waiting, dear Mary (2x)

It's clear to us, we want to stay further apart
Our tragedy has spilled like a work of lost art
Daring bites under your broken neck
You are the death in my falling tears
Six seconds of true love, I haven't felt you breathe
It's cold in the sun, I still haven't felt you breathe

(chorus)
#3
although I'm not a fan of emo I thought i'd have a look. As a whole i don't really like it but i did enjoy the 2nd verse, well done
my songs in my sig if you wanna have a look
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Quote by bass-boy-garith
well done mr. kiss my bass, well done
#4
I really like these lyrics. They're deep and meaningful, and seem to be for an acoustic song?
Two hands, holding one guitar.
#6
Quote by Erlendhagen3
sure is emo allright, but I kinda liked it. wasn't like all the other love songs filled with sunshine and rainbows....it's dark and brutal. Don't like all the repeats, but, if you like it, keep it. Good work mate. C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1079716



thank you for your comment.. it was my first attempt to write an emo song haha..
#7
Quote by deadlyMETAL
I really like these lyrics. They're deep and meaningful, and seem to be for an acoustic song?


thanks for the idea of making this an acoustic.. im gonna try it out and see how it sounds.
#8
Quote by kiss my bass
although I'm not a fan of emo I thought i'd have a look. As a whole i don't really like it but i did enjoy the 2nd verse, well done
my songs in my sig if you wanna have a look



thank you for enjoying my song.. im not really a fan of emo myself.. this was an attempt to write in that fashion..
#9
Quote by danceandpretend
That's good stuff. I can relate to these lyrics and i really like them



thank you very much,.. im glad you liked them.