This is the first song I've written... its quite emo i know.. but u gotta write bout ur feelings? well that's what I've read so... critique away please...

the world was against me,
But i ran my race
now I've come through and
faced my fears

My heavy arms hang
my breaths get deeper
my ribs crushing down
pinning me to the floor

i cry to this day
staring at the moon
of what could have been
the way you died so soon

i took a last breath
of the cold outside air
as the crimson blood
drained your life away

i spoke to soon
before these gates of pain
as i was swept aside
by the death of you

i cry to this day
thinking of you
of what could have been
of what could have been

thanks in advance
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