#1


'We all have to get away,
over the hills to a quiet bay,
And there together we'll sit 'til dark
and forget about the normal way..'

*Chorus*
'If we try hard it'll last forever,
Try hard and it'll last forever
I knew if we sat there, all together
Try hard enough and we'd live forever..'

'It's so quiet sitting here,
we don't care, no we have no fear,
and as we sat around and talked
everything became so clear..'

*Chorus*
'If we try hard it'll last forever,
Try hard and it'll last forever
I knew if we sat there, all together
Try hard enough and we'd live forever..'

'The velvet sky is carefully draped,
over the sand dunes we lie beneath,
and i was reminded of the big city we escaped,
As we circled the fire in a tiny wreath.'

*Solo*

'A guitar appeared into our hands
We told stories of life and loves lost,
And we played on the shady golden sands,
While sunlight spread like a paradoxic frost..'

*Chorus*
'If we try hard it'll last forever,
Try hard and it'll last forever
I knew if we sat there, all together
Try hard enough and we'd live forever..'

'The fire dwindled to glowing red embers
like the last blazing sun of September,
And the sea closed in, from the shore,
and I wanted to remember..'

'The night we spent under the stars
Without restriction, without bars,
We were free we were not tethered
And as I watched a field of heather
beside me flow in the morning wind,
I felt content and realised then,
under the dunes that gave us shelter
how good it was just to be together..'

*Outro*

Please Crit my work
By the way, this is my second piece, crit my other one if you have the time! Sig below..
Thanks.
Last edited by aidzo_og at Apr 7, 2009,
#2
Just going to blackdot this for now man, I'm working in the morning so gotta get a shower and some stuff sorted out before bed.

I'll get back to it sometime tomoro mate =]
#3
last verse is great, really enjoyed it as a whole
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