#1
the enemy of my enemy (pick a side)
your choice deciding who lives and dies
the hunter kills for pride
the hunted bred to die.

Whoa! Caught in a war,
(trapped in a jar)
the hunter and the hunted and me!
(they aim with ****ing glee)

the prisoners run free
rioting with glee
(so give the guard his gun
and get ready to run!)

Whoa! Caught in a war,
(trapped in a jar)
the hunter and the hunted and me!
(they aim with ****ing glee)

(these glyphs prove to me)
there is no need to
fear him!
(we are just caught in the crossfire)
and our need it so dire!

critique?