This is the beginning to a song i'm writing. Its really my first attempt at writing lyrics so it might be bad. Tell me what you think.

You came to me in my dreams
It felt so real or so it seemed
I woke up and you weren't there
Without you I'll just have to bare

Goodbye baby blue
I'll have to live without you
Never see you anymore
In my dreams you do occur
It's not my imagination, I've got a gun on my back!