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It sounds good its pretty hard to hear the vocals though, the piano is alot louder than the mic. On the parts where you go higher I can hear them a little better but other than that it sounds good. I thought it was a creative song I really liked the piano and from what I could hear your voice sounded good aswell.

crit mine?

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