#1
maybe ten percent less leaves on this tree means
more gasoline but less fuel so everything burns down
faster but slower but faster but slower so it all equates.
I just guess these sort of things have a lifespan,
some twenty-something white trash that treats his hands
like matches.


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hiyh. I need a little oppionated help on this. Mainly the 2nd to the last line before "some" there seems to be a word that wants to fit there, but it's not "like" as there already is a like on the last line and it's wrong grammer.

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Last edited by Laces Out Danny at Mar 6, 2009,
#2
screw the trees XD
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