#1
guys im writing a song (kinda romantic/angry)

i was thinking a slow intro,a quit verse 1 and a heppyier chorus and such

i am thinking of the key of D,but could do G

for the intro i tried and kinda liked

P.M.'ed
[not P.M.ed]
Am Em [Am C]
Am Em C Am
Am Em G Dsus4(no P.M. strummed quickly)

Verse (strongly strummed,kinda mad like)

Am C Em G
Am C Em C Dsus4

any ideas for chorus
first post suggested

G Em C Em G Dsus4

played on acoustic standard or maybe even ill transpose to half down.

thanks
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Last edited by nowa90 at Mar 6, 2009,
#2
Well the song is in G (Em), I recommend going between D and Dsus4 for fun.

But for a chorus try:

C Em C Em Dsus4 G
No means maybe
#3
Quote by nowa90
guys im writing a song (kinda romantic/angry)

i was thinking a slow intro,a quit verse 1 and a heppyier chorus and such

i am thinking of the key of D,but could do G

for the intro i tried and kinda liked

P.M.'ed

Am Em C Am
Am Em G Dsus4(no P.M. strummed quickly)

Verse (strongly strummed,kinda mad like)

Am C Em G
Am C Em C Dsus4

any ideas for chorus?
played on acoustic standard or maybe even ill transpose to half down.

thanks


No offense, but do you want us to write your song?

I could help you analyze it, but give you chords for the chorus? it's your music right? whats the point of having someone give you the chords for your own song? You're the artist... your the one that has something to express. Where you take it for the chorus should come from within you. You need to hear it, and find it. if you can't do that, you should spend more time cutting your teeth until you have enough experience to draw from to create your own music.

Sorry if that was harsh at all, but I don't think you'll learn anything as a writer if you don't do it yourself, and gain your own experiences with music.
shred is gaudy music
Last edited by GuitarMunky at Mar 6, 2009,
#4
Quote by GuitarMunky
No offense, but do you want us to write your song?

I could help you analyze it, but give you chords for the chorus? it's your music right? whats the point of having someone give you the chords for your own song? You're the artist... your the one that has something to express. Where you take it for the chorus should come from within you. You need to hear it, and find it. if you can't do that, you should spend more time cutting your teeth until you have enough experience to draw from to create your own music.

Sorry if that was harsh at all, but I don't think you'll learn anything as a writer if you don't do it yourself, and gain your own experiences with music.
kinda harsh,i get your point..and to defend myself i made the intro/verse by myself buddy

thanks to the guy above,i kinda like it.
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#5
Quote by nowa90
kinda harsh,i get your point..and to defend myself i made the intro/verse by myself buddy

thanks to the guy above,i kinda like it.


Thats good. You should write the whole thing! I mean if you got that far on your own, I'm sure you could come up with one more part. And you should know if you like it yourself anyway, it is your song.

LOL sorry again. I'm not good at candy coating advice.
shred is gaudy music
Last edited by GuitarMunky at Mar 6, 2009,
#6
Quote by GuitarMunky
Thats good. You should write the whole thing! I mean if you got that far on your own, I'm sure you could come up with one more part. And you should know if you like it yourself anyway, it is your song.

LOL sorry again. I'm not good at candy coating advice.
ahh its ok,i just needed a push i think

im messing around here,and its getting better

ther best is when i ply it tomorrow and the n i realise if I was just hyped or it really sounds kinda good.

happended to the last 2 attempts..
final copy in maybe 30 mins?
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
Taking an Internet break for a while, will come on when I can.
#7
Quote by nowa90
ahh its ok,i just needed a push i think

im messing around here,and its getting better

ther best is when i ply it tomorrow and the n i realise if I was just hyped or it really sounds kinda good.

happended to the last 2 attempts..
final copy in maybe 30 mins?



Cool. Have fun with it! that's all that matters IMO.
shred is gaudy music
#8
Quote by GuitarMunky
Cool. Have fun with it! that's all that matters IMO.

i am, and i got it!

just need to try to get an outro,any ideas?
im holding the solo off till i now its good lol.

Finished for now
Intro:

P.M.'ed----|
Am Em Am C
PM-----------|
Am Em C Am
PM-----------|
Am Em G Dsus4


Verse (strongly strummed)

Am C Em G

Am C Em C(2) Dsus4


Chorus:

G Em C Em G Dsus4


VERSE


Bridge:
Softly strummed

G C Dsus4 Em Am D C(2) G

G C Dsus4 Em Am D G C(2)


Chorus

Verse

Chorus

Bridge

Verse

Outro

clueless?
maybe same as Bridge?
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
Taking an Internet break for a while, will come on when I can.
Last edited by nowa90 at Mar 6, 2009,
#9
Have you written a singing melody or a melody yet? Chords are accompaniment, accompaniment is there to accompany and make a melody sound better.
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