#1
The most horrible song I've ever written.


Another bruise on your face, and a flood of tears,
Another court case, and I’m done for three years.
Another baby left to suffer, another life of fear,
Domestic violence is an art, and you’re my canvas dear.

Another scar on your thigh, and blood on the knife,
Another lawsuit, now I’m in a bit of strife.
Another shot of vodka, another shot at my wife.
Domestic violence is satisfying, it completes my life.

You think you got problems? I’m just having fun,
Don’t talk about the future, ‘cos you know you got none.
Sit and take it like a man, don’t dare try to run,
Put down the phone, I’ll put down the gun.

Another broken jaw, things start to get rough,
Another divorce, and I lose half my stuff.
Another life broken, and it makes me feel tough,
Domestic violence is addictive, I just can’t get enough.

Another hole in your chest, opened with my .44,
Another break-up, and she walks out the door.
Another fractured skull, another brick on the floor,
Domestic violence is a game, and I’ve set the highscore.

You think you got problems? I’m just having fun,
Don’t talk about the future, ‘cos you know you got none.
Sit and take it like a man, don’t dare try to run,
Put down the phone, I’ll put down the gun.

(All screamed)
Another bruise on your face, and a flood of tears,
Another court case, and I’m done for three years.
Another baby left to suffer, another life of fear,
Domestic violence is an art, and you’re my canvas dear.
#3
^you say it is ****ed up but this song should be your athem judging by your user name lol

on topic i liked it and yea it is ****ed up lol
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#6
That's pretty cool. Disturbing. The rhyming is very good and does not feel forced. Genre? I'm thinking thrash.
#7
cheers jwizzle. Thrash probs, maybe a little less aggresive, building up towards the end.