#1
Its been one whole year since you made me feel
Like I’d rather be dead
Its been one whole year and I still can’t get you
Out of my head
That’s twelve whole months since I’ve been wanting
To see you again
That’s twelve whole months that I’ve been wishing
That you’d never been

I guess
That I’m probably a loser
And I know
That she couldn’t have made things much worse
And I guess
I’d really like to see her
And I know
Just how much she’d drive me insane

Oh, It’s been one whole year since you made me feel
Like I’d rather be dead
Its been one whole year and I still can’t get you
Out of my head
That’s twelve whole months since I’ve been wanting
To see you again
That’s twelve whole months that I’ve been wishing
That you’d never been
#2
Sounds like a pop punk kinda thing.
I think the use of the word "loser" is a bit generic, but other than that, it flows well, it's honest, straight forward, and very effective.
kudos.
#3
i really like how you put a time (one whole year)
it gives the listener a better look on how you feel
i like the working title as "losers" there's not many songs named that way
nice job.
#4
Quote by kingaussie
Sounds like a pop punk kinda thing.
I think the use of the word "loser" is a bit generic, but other than that, it flows well, it's honest, straight forward, and very effective.
kudos.

thank you, and yeah, I was thinking of it sounding something like Green Day or Reel Big Fish.
#5
I agree with you, this definitely sounds like Green Day. This is a very punk sounding piece. I liked it, I don't think there is much wrong with it.