i only listened to Storms of Madness. I can't tell if you're rapping or singing. if you're singing try improve on that. Other than that try to work on the lead guitar, it's kinda bland. Intresting though, good job. also, id appreciate a critque here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1082863
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