#1
I usually never write this kind of stuff. NEVER.

Synth isn't my thing, but it was nice writing this instead of metalcore all the time.

I've heard it reminds people of Attack! Attack! or A Day to Remember, but i dont know, decide for yourself.

C4C
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Qwerty.zip
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#3
Pretty cool stuff...You know your (s)(h)(i)(t).
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#4
Quote by MattAnderson111
I usually never write this kind of stuff. NEVER.

Synth isn't my thing, but it was nice writing this instead of metalcore all the time.

I've heard it reminds people of Attack! Attack! or A Day to Remember, but i dont know, decide for yourself.

C4C


I don't like that stuff but you must know your way around gp for that. Pretty cool.
#5
First half of "ClapYoHands" was pretty much perfect for me considering the genre and what not as were the outro, the verse and the intro.

However, I can't say I'm really feeling this main riff of yours the one the guitar and synth both play. I mean the harmony was nice but I think it was waaay over used and a tad under-developed like.. I dunno. I just wasn't feeling it with htis one I'm afraid. I think the problem is that it fall into synth-wnk terratory, as if the whole song is riding on the hope that people like the synth lead and with out it its not really anything thaat amazing.

essentially, it doesn't feel like a song to me, rather, a demonstration of an amature bands favourite new synth.

Lol but don't be disheartened or anything man. I agree its nice to just get away from metal some times, to write something different than you're used to and such. And if you were just using this to break the same as it were then good on you,

Didn't mean to sound harsh or anything.

crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1083406
Probably not your style, but I've seen other things you've written and I figure you might be able to help out anyway.