#1
Over on my profile.
A few bits and pieces from my new band ideas.
All rough ideas, recorded straight to my computer via Behringer pedals (I know, my amp was stolen ) and into the Mic input.


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#2
well, the tone could've been better haha, but great playing. On the riff w/ drums, the one cymbal was overpowering, couldnt hear the guitar at all really. and maybe turn of the metronome, that what the drums are for. But playingwise it was really good. Crit me? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1082863&highlight=CHOCOmoney
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#3
the song idea one was pretty sweet, only you used every method possible to drag out that intro riff. its a killer riff, but it doesnt need the chords and then the mutes after being played out that long. the rest of the riffs were cool, but nothing too standout. the interlude was very killswitch, and pretty neat. i laughed at the guitar riff with drums because the drums sound punishing! it reminded me of the winds of plague breakdowns that go mega slow, are absolutely brutal. i dont think tahts what you were going for though, and it was too muddy to hear...

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#4
Your tone is awesome man, the guitars went out of sync for a couple of bars in the intro so you should probably fix that up =\

And after the octave chords in the intro, chop off the next bit of the intro, it would sound awesome straight from octave chords to some chugging.

The rest of the song was awesome.

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#5
yeah man i liked em
the song idea one was pretty ace tbh!
great riffs and structured just like a metalcore song should be!


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#6
Thanks for the crit guys, I'll get to yours as soon as I get some free time!

They're all pretty rough recordings, just getting my basic ideas down ready to take to the band, I'll definitely take what you guys have said into consideration.

As for the metronome on that one track, I completely forgot to take it off before I saved it, and I lost the raw file! I know what you mean about the cymbal taking over the song, it was my first time using the drum software I've got, so it was really just getting to grips to it.


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#7
One more track added; It's got drums on because I was playing around with my drum software and then put some guitars to it, it goes a little out time in the first riff, and it'll lead on to something afterwards.


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