#1
I really want to finish this guy, I like how its coming out. Its in my profile labeled as "Metal".

Thanks for looking!
Whats the longest word?


Quote by timzee117
smiles

because theres a mile between the two s's!


/killme
#2
I like the sweeps.

You might wanna use a drum beat that's something other than just a four count on the bass drum though.
#3
Adding the drums confuse me. I dont know what sounds right or good so i just went with basic metal stuff. haha
Whats the longest word?


Quote by timzee117
smiles

because theres a mile between the two s's!


/killme
#5
Try an octave higher at 0:47 to 0:51, might give it a little bit more of that rushing feel.
#6
Ahh yes i came by you on YouTube once i think. I must say, though some Gen-Metalcore shows here (notice i didnt finish the word because i feel thats insulting), i must say you pulled it together very tightly, and tastefully. Id say this song would be pretty damn good as long as the vocals are decent.

Crit mine man?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1085212