#1
met three weeks ago.
its been two weeks
since i started feeling this
gettin weak every time she speaks

i want to be more than friends " this is build up to the chorus."

less than married
but more than this
still savoring
our very first kiss

been dropping hints
but im bout to drop the bomb
my nerves are failing
but i just gotta keep calm

i want to be more than friends

less than married
but more than this
still savoring
our very first kiss

break the clock give me time
cant lose you before i had you
baby i can be that guy
im gonna see this through
#2
I feel this could be more complex. I like your basic idea, but with a topic as cliche as this, you need to stand out. I'm not saying I didn't like it, because I thought it was a cute little "I like you" story Just add some length and utilize a thesaurus and you'll be golden
#4
its a cool song, I can imagine it as some pop-punk thing. It's straight forward and not too serious thats ok, the only part I really dont like is "I want to be more than friends" part. That is cheesy to me and kinda not as awesome as it could be.

thanks for crittin me btw
#5
I really liked the chorus, it flows really good in my mouth.
The one thing i don't like is "I want to be more than friends" Judging by the chorus, i think you can find a less cliche way of saying this
#7
I'd say same as above tbh mate, just keep at it and some good songs start as little "fun" songs so keep at this :P