#3
That's pretty awesome, dude. I couldn't play that song half as well after a year of playing. Tighten it up a bit and maybe add a little volume to the recording and you're good to go

I have a recording of Astral Romance by Nightwish. Take a listen if you have the time

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#4
Very nice job for only playing for a year. I suggest to keep pushing yourself because it does pay off. The rhythm playing sounded good, but the lead playing needs some work. It could be cleaner, and the tonality isn't too great. But, since you have only been playing for just over a year that's really to be expected. I'd appreciate a critique on mine also:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1084461

Thanks.