#1
Finally I wrote something with my limited amount of music theory knowledge. A simple chord progression song in A minor. No lyrics yet, my friends are working on it. It track 4 Untitled in my profile. Please have a listen and leave a comment.
#2
Its decent...sounds a bit like 3 Doors Down...that's not a bad thing...it would help a lot if you had some really good vocal melodies on top of it for it to sound real good...It has potential...
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#3
Sounds pretty darn good to me Have you got an idea for the melodies for the lyrics or are you waiting to see what your friends come up with?
#4
No, vocal part is gonna be all up to them. I gonna have to re-do the whole thing, some parts doesnt line up quite right. And I'm thinking about adding a little lead guitar there and there.
#5
Tightened up the bass playing, everything seems to be line up, thinking of adding a solo part at the clean guitar break down or whatever in the middle, or come up with a different progression instead of playing the main riff, what you guys think?? also some lyrics or vocal idea would be awesome.
#6
Nice, yeah reminded me of 3 doors down too.

A solo would be great, don't try to go too fast though! (wouldn't suit the song)

Yeah you should start the solo at 1:54. And then at 2:57 put some lingering notes as an outro-ish thing.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1085835
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Last edited by Demonology at Mar 12, 2009,
#7
Thanks to Demon's input, I added a solo section and a sort of ending section. But still not even an idea of lyric yet
#8
meh don't worry about lyrics unless you have a singer lined up or you're singer :P

Upload the version with the solo? I really wanna hear the awesomeness.
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#10
Solo is nice man, there's a couple of notes that sounded off but I'm no theory expert so I can't say what they were.

The outro is awesome!
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