#1
This song was inspired by a really weird night. This girl was into me, i was kinda into her but unsure and **** (we were all drunk), i ended up with another girl, but wondered if i should have gone with the other girl, (she was hotter, but she had a 30year old boy friend, and i didnt want to get my arse kicked), so i got all these texts from her through the night, and ****. Anyway, heres the song, havent written the parts for it yet, its just the lyrics

go easy peeps

Luxury Problem

Going down to the carnival
After the show
My hands are sweaty and tired
It makes me grow

The lights are down and out
I can’t see ****
The girls are all around
I don’t wanna quit

If I want to choose
I better be wise
It will be the booze
Don’t buy the lies

The booze makes me wanna
The blues makes me wanna
The girls make me wanna
They all make me wanna go blind

It’s all a Luxury problem!

I meet this girl in town
I wanna do
Along comes girl in bar
It is girl two

I get this feeling
I am not for you
If I go for girl one
What do I do?

I have to choose
I am not wise
It is the booze
I buy the lies

The booze made me do it
The blues made me do it
The girls made me do it
The all made me go dead blind

It was a luxury problem
It was a luxury problem
#2
I meet this girl in town
I wanna do
Along comes girl in bar
It is girl two

I think this part is hard on the mouth, it doesn't really sound right

I meet this girl in town
I wanna do
Along comes another
Its girl number two

This is better.
I'm FAT!
#3
LMAO, this reminds me of Bill Bailey's "I texted you on a monday..."

I like the song but your description of what the song was about kinda made me sigh for mankind a little.
C&C: A lot of the words are a little hard on the mouth, "luxury problem" for example, it's just not very pretty wording. I like the concept though, good dilemma and what not.
Nice work.

EDIT:

Link, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fiwl2V_lric
Last edited by MrCuddles at Mar 9, 2009,
#4
Quote by tatatotfolife
I think this part is hard on the mouth, it doesn't really sound right

I meet this girl in town
I wanna do
Along comes another
Its girl number two

This is better.


Yeah, i agree, i was unsure about that one actually, but now that you put it that way, its sounds a lot better
Cheers dude
#5
Quote by MrCuddles

I like the song but your description of what the song was about kinda made me sigh for mankind a little.



I do see your point, but yeah, just an unusual situation for me i guess, and i prompted me to get it out in a way, so i wrote a song about it