Poll: How cheesy!? 1 - not very 5 - VERY
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1 Naah it's not that bad
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IS THIS TOO CHEESY?!

This song is meant for acoustic and i wrote it pretty quick, but i was wondering weather it sounded too cheesy.

The point of it is to be basically; shut the **** up and smile.

But it came out a lot cheesier!

Let me know what you think. AND THE CHEESE LEVEL!


Verse:
Get to know me.
I’ll get to know you,
Talk and tell,
That’s what we’ll do,
Feeling lonely?
Come out with me.
We’ll pass the time,
Just wait and see.
Don’t let those bad eggs,
Get you down.
Inside them all,
There’s goodness to be found.

Chorus:
What’s life…without the people around you?
What’s life…without the happiness inside you?
What’s life…without the love that surrounds you?
Don’t waste your time,
Smiling’s not a crime.

Verse:
No one wants to be left out,
No one wants to be sad.
So let us take you out somewhere,
You’ll have the best time you ever had.
Though sometimes you should be alone,
But only for a while,
Once you’ve cleared your head.
Join back in and smile!

Chorus:
What’s life…without the people around you?
What’s life…without the happiness inside you?
What’s life…without the love that surrounds you?
Don’t waste your time,
Smiling’s not a crime.

Bridge:
Seriously, why you feeling distressed?
Wear your smile; you’ll look your best.
No matter how ****ty things get,
Don’t forget
Smiling’s not a crime.
Smiling’s not a crime.
Smiling’s not a crime.

Chorus:
What’s life…without the people around you?
What’s life…without the happiness inside you?
What’s life…without the love that surrounds you?
Don’t waste your time,
Smiling’s not a crime.
But if it were I’d be fined.


Thanks =]