#1
Yeah, this is one of my bands unrecorded songs, I just thought I'd throw it out here for some critique

Please no "this is just noise" though, if you don't like the genre, fine don't listen

C4C of course

*added Midi track for those without GP
Attachments:
Deff Mettle.zip
Last edited by destroy_techno at Mar 9, 2009,
#2
This is damn groovy.

Or something. Idk.

Bars 19-22 are especially

I would love to hear it recorded.

C4C?
Last edited by AA00P at Mar 10, 2009,
#3
As much as I don't like tremolo picking, you used it in an amazing way!
The song is very brutal and catchy, props for being able to play it, too lol.
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#4
Dude that was awesome and groovy as hell too. I love brutal death metal when it's done right. I'm just a little disappointed the bass didn't get any fills since usually in really groovy brutal death metal songs the bass gets at least 1 fill. Other than that this song is great. I specially liked the part with the harmony, it sounds badass. I solo or maybe some sweeping origin style would have been cool but the song is great as it is. Keep up the good work.

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#5
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Dude that was awesome and groovy as hell too. I love brutal death metal when it's done right. I'm just a little disappointed the bass didn't get any fills since usually in really groovy brutal death metal songs the bass gets at least 1 fill. Other than that this song is great. I specially liked the part with the harmony, it sounds badass. I solo or maybe some sweeping origin style would have been cool but the song is great as it is. Keep up the good work.

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Well, most of our songs do have bass fills, I excluded it inthis song since it would sound too much of the same, I'm the bassist, so it's not like we're one of those bands with an inaudible bass

sweeps would ruin it IMO
#6
just amazing!
id love to see this played live :p

19 - 22 was ace haha, might have to give it a blast later on :p

some parts after that are insane man!
get a vid posted of you playing them!


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#8
Woah great track here! Some really groovy riffs you got there, sounds like something you could really get into. And I just noticed everyone else said it, but yeah, that riff at bars 19-22; I am in love with haha, sounds really good. Sounds sooo heavy too.

I would love to hear this recorded, I look foward to it, I wish I could write riffs with tremelo picking that fast haha, that must take some practise! Nice job, anyways. Would sound killer with some (GOOD) vocals too.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1082007 Thanks!
#9
Great stuff. The only thing I had problems with is the intro riff. In my opinion it gets a little repetitive towards the end. Other than that it pretty awesome.