#1
Hey, another post.
Tell me what you think:

Well torn.
The sheets are piling high.
You don't want to see this mess.

Forget//What you ****ing heard.
(I'll make you scream out loud.)
So shut//the door.
(I'll make you ****ing proud.)
So break//A leg.
(It's a performance, take a bow.)
If I didn't know better...
I'd say it was agony.

Sweat drips down//your face.
(While eyes are glowing for me.)
Your thoughts intertwined//with mine.
(Your heart beating in time.)
So dirty yet so squeeky clean.
A lip bit til it bleeds.
A stare that breaks down the strongest man.
And it's all mine.

You walk through the door...
With ecstacy on your shoulders,
On your shoulders, on your shoulders.
You whisper in my ear...
A secret for me alone,
You love me, you love me.

You wake//shocked and amazed
(Like you've never died before.)
Define peace with the quietest gasp.
(Breathe while you can.)
The sun shines//through an open window
Revealing shattered dreams.
All of the//SCREAMING
Things that don't matter anymore.

Tonight

You're addictive//Like a heroin.
The most dangerous of kinds.
When the//sun dies.
You'll keep me warm.
When the...
You'll be...

YEAH!


You walk through the door...
With ecstacy on your shoulders,
On your shoulders, on your shoulders.
You whisper in my ear...
A secret for me alone,
You love me, you love me.

It's all mine...
Ohhh.

It's... all... mine...

Forget//What you ****ing heard.
(I'll make you scream out loud.)
So shut//the door.
(I'll make you ****ing proud.)
So break//A leg.
(It's a performance, take a bow.)
After all that we've done.
You'll smile from the sheer brutality.
Quote by Twisted Magnum
I'd throw a Marshall MG at him while he succumbs to tone killing gain.

Quote by King Krapp
Spend all $200 on M&M's, then find a friend with an acoustic, and fill the body with them. Why? Because you can.

#2
ir reminds me of a song linkin park might do
When I buy my wife, at first she cook good, her vagine worked well, she strong on plow, but three years later when she was fifteen, she receive hair on her chest, her voice become deep, "BORAT, BORAT", and her vagine hang like sleeve of wizard
#3
it reminds me of a song linkin park might do
When I buy my wife, at first she cook good, her vagine worked well, she strong on plow, but three years later when she was fifteen, she receive hair on her chest, her voice become deep, "BORAT, BORAT", and her vagine hang like sleeve of wizard
#4
Haha, uhmmm. Try Misery Signals... or As I Lay Dying. More of that stuff, buddy.
Quote by Twisted Magnum
I'd throw a Marshall MG at him while he succumbs to tone killing gain.

Quote by King Krapp
Spend all $200 on M&M's, then find a friend with an acoustic, and fill the body with them. Why? Because you can.

#5
Forget//What you ****ing heard.
(I'll make you scream out loud.)
So shut//the door.
(I'll make you ****ing proud.)
So break//A leg.
(It's a performance, take a bow.)
If I didn't know better...
I'd say it was agony.
your best stanza it was awesome. limitless possibilities man. kudos.if you make all your writings as good as this part. you will be amazing
c4c? want to play in sig plz
#6
Quote by grayelbows
Forget//What you ****ing heard.
(I'll make you scream out loud.)
So shut//the door.
(I'll make you ****ing proud.)
So break//A leg.
(It's a performance, take a bow.)
If I didn't know better...
I'd say it was agony.
your best stanza it was awesome. limitless possibilities man. kudos.if you make all your writings as good as this part. you will be amazing
c4c? want to play in sig plz



Thanks a ton, man!

Sure thing, I'll check it out.