#1
i would dig a hole inside
everything that makes u cry
and set it alight
...it will keep us warm for tonight

i will feel the void and the cracks
whilst we're sitting in the front seat
with reason in the back
and if i can't get to sleep, i hope you can get to sleep

i would let you in my head,
unlock the door, make the carpets red
so you could come inside
and for you i could confide

the truth is always only a tongue away
that scar you have that gets you afraid
naivity being your biggest enemy
and loss of trust is mine...

thats it!


this came out of nowhere and is my first piece, so i don't know how to feel about it. I feel the ending needs work. What do you guys think? much appreciated
#2
Hi mate!

Welcome to S&L. We have some rules around here that we ask all members to follow in order to make everything as streamlined and simple as possible. If you could take a look at the thread here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/announcement.php?f=7&announcementid=128 and then repost this thread correctly, we'd greatly appreciate it.



-zC