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#1
tres puntos.


---But You---

As I skimmed stones over the river at sunrise
the amber of the sky shone off my grey eyes,
and through my broken retina, the orange reflected
and drove in to my mind
but the cold of the air froze my breath as I sighed
so soon the orange had turned to a wintery white

I threw one more stone
and it dropped deep in to the green
as the ripple from the impact cracked the water’s gleam
I knew I couldn’t defeat the fact
that every time the stone sank
it swallowed up another sunbeam

I know I’ve been
trying to set concrete over dreams
and ride a boat over rocky seas.
but I’ve been poking holes in this tapestry.

I’ve been feeling
like a drop of water in a concrete ocean
or a smaller star being burnt up by the sun,
but truth is I’m just wires
and I’ve been busy starting other fires
I just don’t know how to measure
when the damage has been done

what is constant once was feeling
and I’m sure this means something

I know I’ve been
trying to set concrete over dreams
and ride a boat over rocky seas.
but I’ve been poking holes in this tapestry.



---Afternoon Walk with Jesus---

I came from a sheltered life.
Alcohol is bad,
sex is bad,
drugs are bad,
and girls have cooties.
I spent many a day in the woods
jerking off.
Momma could never know about that...
only a bad boy would rub his cock.

It all changed when college came
full-stride into the room and
kicked me in the balls.
Suddenly Momma's calling to remind me
Jesus is with me, and I've got to
pause the beer pong for a chat.

"Yes momma, Iiii knows. Gardien Angles.
Yes momma, I know I'm going to hell.
yes momma... click"


Jesus took me out for a stroll one afternoon,
we were wading across campus through
hangovers and the remnants of last nights festivities.
"You know son, eventually you're gonna have to
clean up your life. Otherwise you'll go to hell."
I can't be sober for this type of conversation.
"Look Jesus, is that a rabbit?"
"I love Rabbits!"
One beer from the hands of a passed out drunk,
up-ended; chug chug chug

"Me-dammit!
When are you going to learn?
You have to follow the book exactly,
otherwise you'll be just another screw-up.
You people are the most ignorant, self-righteous
assholes out of all of my creations."

"Jesus, didn't your mother tell you not to be rude?
Or is that just my assholeish self-righteousness speaking?"
#2
Thanks for putting this up, love. If I'd have known you were using such an old piece I'd have used something better
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#4
Red. I thought that this was one of zachs better pieces, but the ending failed to connect with me, and so it lost a lot of value.
#5
Quote by ZanasCross
lol, this is only like 3 weeks old. It's the only thing I had that hadn't been in any comps yet.


...fairy nuft.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!