these are the first lyrics i've wrote and will practice to write better,i need some opinions?


eternal pain,your soul purched
lost in hell,trying to muster a worth
this place of curse your home forever
your right with satan at hells center
he knaws on you,on his fiery slope
you betrayed the lord,you have no hope
it was your destiny,jesus was meant to die
it was god's plan,your payment...satan knawing on your insides
god thy father,the reason for this
a god so selfish only him and his son in eternal bliss
jesus died for us,but humanity is condemed to hell
we must all....rebel