#1
Well. This will be the third song I've ever wrote.
Please feel free to give any sort of suggestion.
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Hiding behing my tears
I've been waiting for the chance
to show you who I really am.

Everything lost and nothing gained
this all seems to just, be a game
all the things I've done are washed away...

You never see me in the light,
I'm always in the dark through your eyes
Let that light shine on me someday!

Through sweat and blood I've fought this fight,
Everyday and every night.
I just need to show you who I am..... WHO I AM.

Even a heart as big as yours has left no place for me,
I've been knocking on that door, but you're not on your way.

Give me this chance.
Give me this time.
Something is nothing, and nothing is mine.

You never see me in the light,
I'm always in the dark through your eyes
Let that light shine on me someday!

...Someday... You'll see me in the light.
...Someday... I'll Finally win the fight.
You'll finally be mine.

Someday..
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What do ya think?!
#2
Quote by IommiPage
I really like it, it reminds me of a situation I've been in, so that's probably why. Good job.

Thanks!

Keep the input coming guys! I really need this!!