#2
Even heavier going the last one
Things to watch out for: Solo was good, just might want to turn it down a little, and again with the abrupt ending.
Other than that, pretty damn awesome bro.
#3
Awesome stuff. I envy your tone As for the writing of the song, I think it's very refined already. No changes needed til you get vocal. When the solo kick in, somehow Megadeth's Hangar 18 popped in my mind, which lead to this, maybe after the first solo, give it a couple bar of breakdown like what u did, then kick it with another short solo? Iduno, need to listen to it more to have more productive input. Very awesome stuff tho.
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#5
Crikey, metal!

I'l give it a go.


Uhhh..the guitars sound brutal. (Thats a good thing right? They sound good anyway).

Bit repetitive for me but I'm no metal fan so that could be why I think that.

Lead guitar doesn't sit in the mix very well.

Good work though.
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#6
Good song you got going on there .

Guitar tone is spot on, I pretty much envy it.

Got a good set of riffs going on there, very lamb of gody with a hint of at the gates maybe? although I feel that you overuse the main riff or drag it out a bit too long.

The solo is good, you just got to get the level right, its very in-you-face and drowning out the rythmn and everything else. Ending was a bit abrupt too.

All the song needs a bit of polish and elbow grease and it'll turn a great song into an amazing one .


Have a poke round my profile too and slate me songwriting
#7
Hey Demonology,
Thanks for checking out my beats.
I took a look at your music and am thoroughly impressed.
The drum programming is pretty flossy and I like your guitar tone.
What programs do you use to record? Is that EzDrummer that I hear?
"In A Tux" is my favorite out of the songs you posted, but they're all pretty good.
Keep up the good work man.
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#9
Thanks heaps guys.

The drums were done with a pack of single-hits which I copied into garageband.

The pack of drums is called Beta Monkey's Double Bass Mania and also comes with a load of loops.

All I used to record was garageband.
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#10
repetitive, solo was a little bit lifeless and too loud, playing was well timed though, better than the average player for sure. crit mine sometime?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=19058011#post19058011
#11
sounds good man, i personally thought the tone was a bit muddy, in need of tightening and watch where some bits get repititve, try some variations on the theme.
all in all i liekd it
#12
hey guys, just letting you know I put the new version on myspace http://www.myspace.com/thebenspadaroproject

Only difference is the solo is more equal with the rest of the song, and the backing guitar is panned left and right whilst the solo is now fully in the middle.

Peace~
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#13
I like the riffs. The guitar tone has a little bit of high end fizz and I imagine it could sound better if you EQ'd it out. There isn't enough bass in the mix IMO, is there a bass track?
I think if you recorded a solid bass track, brought up the kick a little it would fill out the mix nicely.

The lack of low end might be due to Myspace actually, the myspace player totally kills all mp3s.

Crit mine?
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#14
AH. Exactly what I like in my metal. That was great. Really great. The riffs stuck in my head. The solo had some great playing in it.

C4C?

Less metal than yours, by alot. Not as good either
meh
#15
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I like the riffs. The guitar tone has a little bit of high end fizz and I imagine it could sound better if you EQ'd it out. There isn't enough bass in the mix IMO, is there a bass track?
I think if you recorded a solid bass track, brought up the kick a little it would fill out the mix nicely.

The lack of low end might be due to Myspace actually, the myspace player totally kills all mp3s.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=19066624#post19066624


Yeah, no bass.

I have a bass but no amp >.>

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AH. Exactly what I like in my metal. That was great. Really great. The riffs stuck in my head. The solo had some great playing in it.

C4C?

Less metal than yours, by alot. Not as good either


I'll get to yours hopefully when I get home.

Maybe I should recorded it directly in and add some **** to it.
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Last edited by Demonology at Mar 19, 2009,
#16
Very cool, great tone great riffs awesome solo. The only thing is the main riff is played way to much, maybe throw a change or 2 to mix it up a bit. If you get some vocals on this it will sound great. keep up the great work. could you crit mine
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