Artemis Entreri
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#1
Tell me what you think of my metalish version of Romanza. C4C.

New version at the bottom now.
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Raven_Flight
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#2
The idea seems cool, though the drums have to be fixed and the tempo should be little faster, more like the original.
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#3
Sounds good but all you've done is use guitars. If you were considering taking it further I'd suggest making an arrangement of it, a la canon rock. Never really considered it before but this would be a brilliant way to bust out some immense instrumental.
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#4
I could make an arrangement...that would definitely be cool. I'll try that. Get rid of the drum set for tympani or something. I'll upload again when I have something. Thanks for the idea.

And I kind of like playing it more slowly, but that's just me. You could speed it up if you preferred.
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#5
For me at least, it seemed that I was waiting for a crescendo that never happened, seemed like it was building up to... well nothing. The idea is strong but it needs more variation
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Artemis Entreri
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#6
How's this?

I added more instruments, but still not much variety as I'm having trouble making it fit well. I also added a sort of crescendo at the end. And increased the tempo. I'd definitely use it as a backing track for an electric guitar, but that's me.
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Last edited by Artemis Entreri at Mar 12, 2009,
Artemis Entreri
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#8
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Sounds like more of a you problem. It's just arpeggios.
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#9
I really liked this. Expanding upon it would be cool. There was some great resolution with the main melody towards the end.