#1
Before I type down these lyrics, I just wanted to intoduce myself and a little bit of history behind the song. Well Im seventeen, just picked up the guitar, pad, and paper about 3 months ago and this is the first song that Iv written, I think that the song is ok overall, just not as complex as I would like my writing to be, or as deep, its pretty much just put out there. Umm... ya youll get the rest from the song. Any input is welcome.

(Chorus)
Its been six months since I was last with you
Rememberance of the things we used to do
Every turn I make, everything I see
It was all the remains of you and me.

I remeber the day that we first met
we were young, shy, and had no regrets
you scratched the ground
I look at the sky
those were the limits
as months went by

(Chorus)

We would miss one another everytime were apart
we would talk through the night 'till the morning would start
but without us knowing we grew more apart
we never thought anything would rip us apart

(Chorus)

I remember that cloudy afternoon
I didnt spend any time with you
I was with my friends at the beach
you were in your bedroom
I didnt have a care in the world
'Cuz i didnt know I hurt my baby girl
I dont know why I did what I did
All I know is ill regret it... for as long as I live

(Chorus) X2
#2
For some reason I imagine being sung to a Linkin Park - ish rhythm.

It was the only task I would undertake...

I P R O G
...to reap the harvest that was mine


- [ P R O G - H E A D ? ] -
#4
I like the line'' but without us knowing we grew more apart''
I think many people could relate to that.
#5
^^^ i like that line too.

this is fantastic, keep us the good work.

u got a band? is it up here somewhere with guitar part?
#6
No, I dont have a band, just me, myself and I lol. Ill try to get some audio up soon... I just dont know what kind of chord progression i should use... and i dont have a mic lol. Currently what I have for the music is just something simple... I need to work on it some more, any suggestions are welcome as usual. Really glad people like this lol.

G..................C................G.........................D
.......Its been six months since I was last with you
G...................C.................G.....................D
......Rememberance of the things we used to do

And it stays like that pretty much throughout the whole song untill the last stanza
G.............................C
.....I remember that cloudy afternoon
G.........................D
.....I didnt spend any time with you
ect...
G...........................D......................................C G D G
......All I know is ill regret it... for as long as I live

Then Chorus normaly