This is my first shot at writing lyrics, so feel free to rip into them if you want, I wont be offended. Im thinking of using these in the chorus of a song Im currently writing. If you want to hear them along with the song, you can get it at my other post

A Red Moon Rises [chorus]
Running! Screaming! Fleeing!
You can't stop the bleeding!
Try as hard as you might,
but a red moon rises tonight.

Panic! Murder! Redemption!
Here it comes! Your execution!
Faced with your own demise,
tonight a red moon will rise.
Last edited by semitone36 at Mar 12, 2009,