Maybe he wants his songwriting ability critiqued? Critiques in the riffs and recording forum is mostly about recording skill.

To T/S
Sorry to be harsh, but it's 2 minutes of the same 3 chords and the same fills without any strong melodic content. It's barely a song.

Half what you got (so it's 45-60 seconds), add a melody to it (probably a singing melody, most people like vocals), write another part to it (whether it's you chorus or bridge or whatever) and you might possibly want another instrument (like a sax or a trumpet or even a guitar) playing a countermelody. Then top your song of with a facemelting guitar solo and you have an awesome song.

Just my suggestions though.
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