#1
And the truth is
Well the truth will never ever really come out
Don't listen to the others
Cause how the hell did they even find out

There's a time, and there's a place
Change perspectives, look around and stop your race

[Hook]
Stop! Slow down
Take the time to see the beauty and hear the sounds
Its flying by, you got too high
There wont always be more time

So when asked
To dismiss
Take a step back and look at everything your gonna miss
now its up to you, it came down to this
Just make sure you get you're one last kiss

[Hook]

[Outro]
And everything you enjoy
Well that is the noise
Its every bit worth fighting for
So take all your plans take em hand in hand
Make sure you're going where you land
#2
Quote by NoIsEs333
And the truth is
Well the truth will never ever really come out - Excellent wording. Possibly could use without the 'ever' though.
Don't listen to the others
Cause how the hell did they even find out - Love this line

There's a time, and there's a place
Change perspectives, look around and stop your race - Not flawless, but very good nonetheless. The first line is kind of out of place here. Time and place for what?

[Hook]
Stop! Slow down
Take the time to see the beauty and hear the sounds
Its flying by, you got too high
There wont always be more time - So true

So when asked
To dismiss - There is no direct object here. Dismiss what or whom?
Take a step back and look at everything your gonna miss
now its up to you, it came down to this
Just make sure you get you're one last kiss - Worded very well here.

[Hook]

[Outro]
And everything you enjoy
Well that is the noise
Its every bit worth fighting for
So take all your plans take em hand in hand
Make sure you're going where you land - This would probably be better as 'make sure you know where you're going when you land.' This outro has the best lines in this entire piece. Very nice.


I would love to hear this when you're done writing it.
There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness. - Friedrich Nietzsche