#1
well, its been awhile and this is about all i got:


Like a cigarette butt
I’m drawn out and stamped out
Resting next to an oil-soaked, wrecked parking lot
Set on top of a broken curb
Just waiting and smoldering
For some poor sucker
To have to sweep me up
And to be honest, I really don’t give a ****
#2
I actually like this. I think the ending could be stronger (last two lines).
You set the tone of the piece really well, and keeping it short helps.
Nice imagery, definitely.
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