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Just wrote this song and in a way its about a argument me and a friend not long had, like what we've been through and etc.
I'm just really wanting to know what you guys think of it and if you can tell me if I'm going wrong somewhere or what I'm doing good, thanks.
Hope you like it and all comments welcome.


What have I become?

Before your eyes, alone and so afraid.

Used to save me from the dying light.

Was I forever set in stone to be in the past?


Suffering in the shadows of today.

Pleasure adds to pain, a sick fantasy to die in vain.

Bare today with a worthless smile.

May not be here again tomorrow.


Anger and rage I can't deny.

Trashy schemes fill us with pride.

You and me, zero to one.

Just say goodbye, one on one.


Suffering in the shadows of today.

Pleasure adds to pain, a sick fantasy to die in vain.

Bare today with a worthless smile.

May not be here again tomorrow.


Thrown away, we are not.

Not caring, maybe.

Why can't things be the way they used to be?