#1
A flower slowly withers,
The vibrant scarlet fades
To brown,
Then gray
Time....
Passes....
The petals have long since fallen off and faded to dust
But the stalk still remains,
Like a promise
Withered and decrepit
Yet still remaining nonetheless
It waits,
Hopeful as a seed
Awaiting rejuvenation


It waits,
Hopeful
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Last edited by Eggmond at Mar 16, 2009,
#3
Its interesting, tells a story.

So u basicly fell in love, and ur feelings withered away with time?
#4
I like it, very short, but very vivid...I don't know if decrepit would be the best word to put in there, keep up the good work
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#5
its more about feeling settled in a relationship.im still in love with the girl but the initial thrill is gone and the novelty has worn off
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#6
I think I would like your writing a lot more if you tried to be less pretentious.