#1
Hai guyz

Just finished writing a song , amongst others, this is one of my best I have written really. It will be also my bands song too

So, I guess, C4C.

Cheers in advance.
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#2
Wow, gotta say, thats one damn good song.

I may even go so far to say that listening to that just inspired me to write **** for my band that isnt so plain and full of *chugga chugga* ****.

Cause that was pretty damn awesome.
#3
The verse reminded me of Arch Enemy's "Nemesis"

After that, it was pretty cool. Sounded a lot like late At the Gates mixed with Arch Enemy' first two. Good, had a very good vibe about it. The Bridge sounded very late Carcass-y/early Arch Enemy(y?). I can only guess you're influenced by Michael Ammott and Bill Steer? The solo was okay, but lacked any melodic flair/motif that could've made it longer and MUCH better. Something like the outro perhaps, but obviously different and in the solo Not diggin' the acoustics though.

8.5/10.

Good melodeath.

My song is "The Glen", the dark ambient piece a few threads down from you.
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cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
#4
I'm sick and it's my nose running, but I feel like i could cry after hearing that.

Great song.
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