#1
Hey guys, this is just a song i've been working on a little bit here and there... i appreciate any feedback...

Queen of Spades

V1: Your Heart breaks cause we are apart
You drink away all your pain
Why can’t you see how smart you are
Your stumbling away from your sanity
Tonight as I sit here writing this song
Your out finding the next walk of shame
Why can’t you see the knife going in my heart
Its blade slowly spilling my blood on your hands
You’ve become my queen of spades

V2: You claim to love me and want me there
But then you say not to blame you for your actions
My queen of spades, the blade drives deeper
Why can’t you out run your demons
You say its all in good fun but my bleeding wont stop
The blood drips on the page, the flood gates will open
My queen of spades, you’re the only one that can stop the blade

V3: I walked in, that dance was suppose to be mine
Why do I always fall for your ****
It always hits me like a brick to the chest
You can never be the girl I want
You are just my queen of spades
#2
I thought it was pretty good. I don't really have any suggestions, just keep writing
Probably a touchy subject, so I'm not going to say much else