#1
FALLING
By Tyson Mann

[verse 1]
Reaching for the moon
so far away
still a while to go
I think I want to get to it
so I can tell her so

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[verse 2]
Waiting at the gate,
Wanting your next word
Hearing all this hate
From the person I like most.

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[bridge]
I'm listening , Learning , Wanting , Lovinng! X4

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.
#2
Quote by tyson945
FALLING
By Tyson Mann

[verse 1]
Reaching for the moon
so far away
still a while to go
I think I want to get to it
so I can tell her so

this was a decent opening verse

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

Its a little cliche but I liked it, sounds like something TRUSTcompany would do

[verse 2]
Waiting at the gate,
Wanting your next word
Hearing all this hate
From the person I like most.

Gate and hate are pretty common rhymes and it makes this verse seem very forced

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[bridge]
I'm listening , Learning , Wanting , Lovinng! X4


[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.


this was pretty good for your first song, its really cliche but I can hear the guy from TRUSTcompany singing it in my head so it has a lot of potential
#3
Quote by tyson945
FALLING
By Tyson Mann

[verse 1]
Reaching for the moon
so far away
still a while to go
I think I want to get to it
so I can tell her so
I really like this part, but the flow seems a bit off to me

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[verse 2]
Waiting at the gate,
Wanting your next word
Hearing all this hate
From the person I like most.

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[bridge]
I'm listening , Learning , Wanting , Lovinng! X4

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.

[chorus]
cause now i'm falling,falling from the stars.
running, running far and far.
Thinking, thinking what I should do.
Cause I think i'm in love with you.


I think its very decent, I don't like how it ends though. I feel like there needs to be one more verse somewhere, because the story just kind of ends, and I need more haha. It just seems you can ran out of thought. If you would please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1088578