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OK i have a few lines here and i was just wondering if it is any good it is my first attempt at writing a song and i need to know if the lyrics are worth keeping

Back to the start
Forget what went wrong
Back to the days where I belong
It all fell apart, and now there's nothing that I can do

I can't take this feeling
I try to stay strong
How could I not see it all along
That things never turn out, the way you want them to

You can probably guess what it's about, no need to elaborate
So any help is welcome