#1
Ok... All I have is the chorus, but lately I've been writing songs that blow, so it would be appreciated if you told me what you think of this, or what I could do to make it better...


(Chorus)
Banging on these four walls that lock me inside
Trying to contol these fears that eats me inside
I can see my exit above
They left me, forgotten, alone to die
Too bad my guardian angel is unable to fly
My guardian angel is unable to fly

crit?
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#3
yeah i know what you mean... it kind of bothered me after I posted it
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!