#1
this is unfinished, I just wanted to get some feedback of what i've got so far
the guitar riff is kinda bluesy and sounds a bit like the brian jonestown massacre


well ive been to hell
and i liked it just fine
they'll sell you your soul back
for 39.95


well ive been to the future
and its not looking good
everyones in their white t-shirts
and we're marching in lines


I think i'm gonna add another verse or two at some point, just wanted to know what people thought so far