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C4C.... this is from a friend of mine and I want to see what you all think

ATTEMPT

I don’t think you understand
The world as we know it
Has gone bad
And I’m gonna fix it
Or at least attempt

If it can’t be perfect
Lets at least try our best

I’ve spent my time following lines
Keeping in step
Making sure it all rhymes
But I’ve got respect
More for those against me
Whether I think them wrong or right
At least they’ve got a drive to fight

So if you haven’t learned from me
Learn from them
Things will not change from doing nothing
Our intentions different, we may disagree
You’ve got to stand for what you believe

{not fiinished yet}
Last edited by fenderdude06 at Mar 17, 2009,